She fell for him

by , posted on September 30th, 2011 in Fiction, Red Writing Hood




Ryan unlocked the glass door of an unremarkable grey building. We went through a tiny lobby area and up five flights of stairs, the clicking of my heels echoing in the stairwell as we climbed.

We got to the top and Ryan pushed open the door that led us into a long hallway. I stared at the maroon paisley pattern in the carpet as he opened the door to his apartment.

“Come on in,” he said, taking my hand.

I was afraid to look up. I stood, rooted to that carpet. I knew I couldn’t go through with it. What seemed exciting and hot at the bar, and then on the street when he kissed me, now simply terrified me.

“Hey, it’s okay. We don’t have to do anything. I can get you a cab home. But I really have to use the restroom, and I don’t want to leave you standing out there by yourself, so could you come inside for a minute? I won’t even breathe in your direction.”

“Okay,” I said, smiling. “As long as you don’t breathe.”

He grinned back and stood aside as I walked in. The first thing I noticed, besides the  gazillion-inch flatscreen on the wall, was a curved staircase with an ornate iron railing leading up to… nowhere.

Ryan walked past me, flipping on lights as he disappeared into a small hallway. I wandered over to the staircase and ran my hand along the cold metal. The steps were steep and almost triangular. I slipped off my heels and put a foot on the bottom. Then I took another step. And another, clutching the railing and wishing I hadn’t had that last beer. I took a few more steps before I could see what was at the top.

“Roof deck,” Ryan said from below me, startling the hell of me. I felt ridiculous for snooping, but something drew me to this staircase.

“Can we go out there?” I asked.

He started up the steps and when he reached around me, his chest pressed into my back and I tensed, the attraction I had for him was overwhelming. He pulled down a lever and popped up a fiberglass lid and I felt the night air cool my face. Ryan squeezed past me and stepped up onto the roof and extended his hand to help me up. I held onto it as I stood and looked around. We weren’t high enough to have  a view of the city, but in one spot where you could see the lights by the river.

“It’s not much, but sometimes I come up here after work to relax,” he said.

I nodded. It was too dark to see anything and the traffic on the streets below us was muted. We stood there, holding hands, in the quiet.

“I guess I should go,” I said. Ryan squeezed my hand. I stepped back down the stairs, again holding tightly to the rail. I was four steps from the bottom when I turned and looked up at Ryan, who was shutting the lid. I stared at his ass and took another step – and missed. I tumbled down the rest of the way, a scream escaping from my throat as I landed at the bottom.

“Holy shit, are you okay?”

He ran down to me where I sat, my ankle twisted under me. I was completely mortified.

“I guess I’m falling for you,” I said.

Ryan snorted. “Yeah. That must be it.”

He helped me to my feet, which is when I realized I couldn’t put any weight on my right ankle. A sharp pain shot through it. He swept me up and carried me to the couch.

“I’ll get some ice. You’re not going anywhere for awhile, babe.”

I rested my head against a pillow and knew he was right.



This post is a work of fiction. It is based on a photo prompt of a winding staircase from Write On Edge It is the continuation of the tale of the widow and the bartender. You can read the last installment here.

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39 Responses to “She fell for him”

  1. earlybird Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 1:40 am

    I’m not surprised she was drawn to that staircase. I liked the fact that the view wasn’t amazing at the top.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Yes. The best view was of Ryan, and you see what that got her!

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  2. Erin Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 1:55 am

    I think she did it on purpose! =)
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Hee!

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  3. Ryan (The Woven Moments) Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 8:14 am

    LOVED this! I want to read more!!
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    Cheryl Reply:

    I got lots more! And I’m glad you want to read more of these characters!

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  4. Marie Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 8:27 am

    Love this! I will be reading the last installment and looking forward to the ext. Visiting through WOE.

    http://thelazyw.blogspot.com/2011/09/before-fortune-tellers-arrive-one-more.html

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    Cheryl Reply:

    Excellent. I’m so glad!

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  5. CDG Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 8:49 am

    Like earlybird, I’m happy the staircase was more ornate than the destination. I’m happy he wasn’t a dick about her change of… heart? And now I’m picturing them sleeping in separate rooms, all hot for each other and unable to act on it.

    Yum.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    hee hee. We shall see..

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  6. Kristy Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 9:30 am

    You captured that early yearning beautifully!
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Thank you! Looking forward to reading yours soon..

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  7. NotJustAnotherJennifer Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 10:21 am

    I love this! Mostly because it probably could have been written about me. I have so many tripping/falling embarrassing moments I’ve lost count. I like the idea of the staircase going nowhere, and then a destination unfolding. Well done!
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    Cheryl Reply:

    I am definitely trying to make her someone to whom we can relate – while also not making her dippy. Glad you liked it!

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  8. Victoria KP Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 10:31 am

    I love the fact that she fell because she was staring at his ass. That would SO happen to me.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Hee! Just trying to make it realistic! ;)

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  9. May Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 10:57 am

    Delicious!
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Hee! Thanks!

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  10. Gayletrini Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 11:36 am

    I loved how you broke the intenseness of her emotion with the humour of her falling. Giggle because this would have so happened to me. As usual fab. Always love your writing.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Thank you so much! I think it would’ve happened to a lot of us. ;)

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  11. Carrie Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 12:39 pm

    I have to agree, I think subconsciously she WANTED to be stuck there :)

    I’m glad she didn’t “fall” into bed with him. I think this could be a great relationship. THey should take it slow
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Yes, she’s still a bit of a hot mess, and he has his own (yet to be revealed) issues.

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  12. Kathleen Basi Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 2:52 pm

    Oh, that was fun to read. I like how you evoked a whole scene that took place before you opened, and did it with such economy of words.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Thank you! I actually wish I had more words, I think it’s a bit choppy, but I guess it worked out okay. ;)

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  13. Kristin @ What She Said Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 2:57 pm

    You write the best male characters. First I had a crush on Brock and now I have one on Ryan. :)
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    Cheryl Reply:

    I’m so hoping to make a really great female character this time around! And yes, it’s fun to write hot men!

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  14. Karen @ TIme Crafted Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    I loved the staircase leading to an okay, but not fab roofdeck (and not his bedroom….but, that has nothing to do with not wanting to see them together, Ryan is hot in my mind!), loved the temperatures in this – hot Ryan, cool iron railing, and loved the ease of her klutzness. Another fun chapter to a great story. :>
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Thank you, Karen! I didn’t even think of the temperature contrast but you are so right. I’m sure they’ll eventually make use of that roofdeck. ;)

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  15. The Drama Mama Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 3:37 pm

    I love the humor she used when she fell, and that it was his butt that caused it. LOL. I love the way this story is developing!
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Thanks! If I had more space I would’ve described his butt a little better. HA!

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  16. MJ from iNeedaPlaydate Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 4:53 pm

    oh a twist… literally ;)
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    Cheryl Reply:

    ha! exactly!

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  17. Kir Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 5:06 pm

    I believe Ryan will be quite the “nurse” to her and her ankle. Like the others, the fact that the staircase was the what drew her and not the rooftop was a good idea. When I saw that picture all I could think of was a room in the Poconos (I am from PA) , it screams “weekend sex” to me. ;)
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    Cheryl Reply:

    yeah, with one of those champagne glass tubs!

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  18. Chrissy @ Soy Mom Says:

    September 30th, 2011 at 9:28 pm

    This was so cute! She totally knew what she was doing by going into his apartment. Love that she fell because she was checking out his ass! I definitely want to read more about her.
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  19. Terry Says:

    October 1st, 2011 at 1:46 pm

    Did I miss something in the photo…first two pieces I read there are falling female characters (as well as romatic males who are there to take care of it). This was sweet…you could feel her curiosity, about him, and the stairs.
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    Cheryl Reply:

    Really? I’ll have to read that one! You didn’t miss anything; the pictures are just for inspiration and you have to figure out how they will fit into a WIP if that’s what you’re currently doing. ;)

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  20. Natalie @ Mama Track Says:

    October 1st, 2011 at 8:51 pm

    First of all, what is it about bartenders? They are intrinsically hot. (Unless they aren’t, if you know what I mean.)

    Love the chemistry here. I wanted to kiss him.
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  21. Hopes@StayingAfloat Says:

    October 3rd, 2011 at 6:01 pm

    I love this! It had me picturing an ass that I would trip and fall down the stairs for. That was fun! :)
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